macqueen assessment 11 more feedback and some schorarly references 0


·         Talk with the tutor to determine if your articles are considered peer reviewed research studies. The instructor wants you to find a peer-reviewed research study that addresses the theory or treatment of phobias that was published after 1990. Please see page 3 for more comments.

·         Revise your introduction to provide an overview of your paper and add your thesis statement “the purpose of this paper is to…”.

·         Be sure to include citations.

·         Revise conclusion to synthesize and summarize your main ideas instead of just repeating them. Please see notes on further suggestions (page 7).